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Deprecated: Function ereg() is deprecated in /home/stihi24/public_html/ipoet24.ru/system/header.php on line 177 Я Поэт 24.ру Стихи о любви Публикация : стихи и рассказы - Это не стих. Это призыв. - Стихи без категории
Мы так часто теряем. Терять — это участь
всех тех, что шагает по хрупкой Земле.
Мы всё время пытаемся вызнать, где лучше,
чтобы жизнь не оставить в удавке-петле.
«Я же сильный» - коронная фраза бойца,
но в реальности ты — лишь запуганный пес.
Нам так страшно терять и идти до конца,
нам так стрёмно обгадить собственный хвост.
А судьба бьет в ответ. Ухмыляется. Щурится.
Ей противны все фобии и трусов инстинкты.
Мы пришли отыскать своё счастье с улицы,
где пугали ловушки и лабиринты.
Ты не хочешь назад. И пристало ль терять
Эти грязные деньги/работу и псевдолюбови?
Посмотри, мы ведь стадо теперь, а не рать!
Чем убито стремление к воле?
Юля, да, написано эмоционально. По-поводу политических взглядов - согласен. Но!
У вас каждый катрен живёт сам по себе. В каждом разная схема рифмовки. Это нехорошо. Вас пока ещё ведут за собой рифмы, а не смысл.
А схема рифмовки, выбранная в первом катрене, должна соблюдаться на протяжении всего стихотворения. Есть, разумеется, исключения из этого правила, но они должны быть оправданы содержанием и смыслом. Смена рифмовки должна подчёркивать основную мысль, ход сюжета, как и смена ритма. Ну, например, рэповые вставки в песнях. А здесь я не вижу необходимости эту схему менять.
Чтобы было понятнее: в первом катрене у вас чередование рифм: женская-мужская, женская-мужская. Во втором - все мужские. Здесь бы я согласился, катрен жёсткий. Но следом идёт третий катрен, где рифмовка: дактиллическая-женская, дактиллическая-женская. Это уже на причитание похоже. Жёсткость потерялась. И "щурится - улицы" рифма заезженная.
В третьем катрене, к тому же, непонятно, кто кого пугал. Мы пугали ловушки, или они нас пугали. В угоду размеру выброшено местоимение "нас", отсюда и непонятность.
И последний катрен, рифмовка: мужская-женская, мужская-женская. Ни одного одинакового катрена)). Нет цельности произведения. Оно развалилось на фрагменты, отдельные высказывания.
Концовка стиха - вопрос "в зал": "чем убито стремление к воле?"
А чем? Вывода нет. Призыв задуматься? Да, присутствует. Но слабовато по отношению к заголовку.
Потому вам отрицательных отзывов и написали. Не стоит огрызаться. Лучше распросить критикующих, почему стих не нравится. Это более конструктивный путь.
В сторону Галины и Александры: если нет времени выписывать конкретные претензии, то лучше проходите мимо. Иначе на пустом месте возникает конфликт.
Даниш, я знаю, что стихотворение не идеальное, но менять то, что пришло извне, я не хочу, ибо это кощунство. Тем более, я не раз писала, что не гонюсь за всемирной славой. Пишу скромно...для себя, в основном. Касаемо концовки..вот тут как раз-таки всё так, как и должно быть - риторический вопрос. Люди сами должны ответить себе на него, а не я. Спасибо за разбор. А огрызаются тут другие - не я.